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La joven pobre tocó las piernas del dueño paralizado… y salvó la finca que todos querían robar

La joven pobre tocó las piernas del dueño paralizado… y salvó la finca que todos querían robar

Welcome to Stories Between Lives.  The townspeople said that Finca Santa Lucía had begun to die the night of the fire.  They repeated it in the square, next to the well, at the church door and in the shop where flour was sold on credit to those who still had credit.  They said that from that night on, nothing was ever the same again.

Neither the smell of ripe apples, nor the noise of carts entering along the dirt road, nor the sweet smoke that used to come out of the old cider cellar.  But it wasn’t true.  The fire had only burned the warehouse at the end of the orchard.  The farm started to die afterwards.  When Don Alonso Valderrama stopped believing that he could still keep her alive, that morning the cold came down from the hills like a wet hand.

The stone house was still standing, covered in vines that no one had trimmed for months. Some dry branches tapped against the closed shutters with a sad sound, as if someone were calling from outside without expecting a reply.  In the courtyard, the old apple tree dropped yellow leaves onto the flagstones.

Earlier, under that tree, baskets of fruit had been sorted, tools had been cleaned, and simple meals had been served to the day laborers.  Now all that remained were wet leaves, some apples split by the impact of the fall, and silence.  The vegetable garden was worse.  Many apples rotted under the trees, sunk in the mud.

Some still had a good, firm, golden part, but nobody bent down to pick them up.  The paths were overgrown with weeds, branches grew unpruned, the fences of the sheep pasture leaned to one side, and in the stable there were only a few thin animals left, cared for more out of habit than hope.  On one side of the property, the burned-out warehouse remained like a black wound.

The half-fallen beams retained the dark color of the old fire.  When the wind blew from there, it still carried a faint smell of burnt wood, dampness, and memories that no one wanted to name. Inside the house, the large kitchen was cold.  The fireplace, which used to never go out completely, had been without a real flame for days.

On the long table there was an empty basket, an unused knife, and a pitcher of water that Doña Mercedes changed every morning, although hardly anyone drank it.  The cider cellar, located under the back of the house, remained closed.  The barrels lay dormant under a layer of dust, as if they too had decided not to expect anything.

Don Alonso Valderrama observed everything from the living room window.  He was 35 years old, but in that wheelchair he looked much older, not because of wrinkles, because his face still retained the firmness of a young man, but because of the way he looked at the world, as if he were seeing it from a distance impossible to cross.

His hands rested on the wheels of the chair.  They were strong hands, with long fingers, marked by years of work, hands that had repaired roofs, pruned trees, and carried sacks.  held reins, lifted stones and helped the men on the farm when the work was too heavy.  Before, nobody in Santa Lucía did a task that Alonso hadn’t done himself at some point.

Now those hands could only push a chair through rooms that were too big.  ” Looking at the garden again as if she were going to ask for forgiveness,” said Doña Mercedes from the doorway.  Alonso did not turn his head. The garden is not to blame for anything. So I stopped punishing him with that face.  Doña Mercedes was 64 years old.

Her gray hair was tied back in a tight bun, and she spoke in a way that seemed harsh, even when she meant to be kind.  She had worked in that house since before Alonso inherited the estate.  I had seen him grow up, make mistakes, work until he collapsed from exhaustion, and become a boss respected by everyone.

and I had also seen it turn off.  “Mateo brought the feed,” Alonso asked.  “She carried it without spilling a drop,” Doña Mercedes paused. “She carried most of it.” Alonso let out a breath that in another time would have been a laugh. At that moment, Mateo appeared in the hallway, his cap askew and his boots caked in mud.

He was 15, with a bright face and that quick, clumsy energy of boys who want to help before they quite understand how. “Doña Mercedes didn’t fall too badly, she only slipped a little near the well. Just a little,” she repeated. “If a hen saw him, she’d retire from excitement.” Mateo looked at Alonso, hoping to find some complicity in him, but his boss’s face quickly closed again .

“Go check the gate,” Alonso ordered.  “They say it was released again last night by the wind.”  “Yes, Don Alonso.”  Mateo practically ran away. Silence fell once more in the house.  Doña Mercedes approached the window and looked towards the road.  “People will come today. I’m not expecting anyone.

You haven’t been expecting anyone for months. That doesn’t stop them from coming.”  Alonso tightened his fingers on the chair wheel.  If it’s Esteban Rojas, tell him I’m not here.  He knows that he is there .  The whole town knows he’s there.  What they do n’t know is if he’s still here.  Alonso finally turned his head.  His dark eyes fixed on her.  Don’t start.

No, sir.  I won’t start.  Others have already started because of you.  He looked away.  The name of Esteban Rojas.  It had become a shadow around Saint Lucia.   A proper merchant, with clean boots and soft words, had begun to appear in the village far too often.  He was asking about the farm like someone asking about a seriously ill person.

He said that buying it would be a way to prevent it from ending up in ruins.  He said that Alonso deserved to rest.  He said many things, all said in a polite tone and all designed to hit where it hurt the most.  Aonso didn’t lack the intelligence to see it, he lacked the strength to confront it.

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